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Ink's a sorry substitute
Emotion's like a prostitute
Write on paper here
What your heart screams to hear

Lined paper will rip
See the cold blood drip
Put them together, jigsaw pieces
Barely choke out a pathetic thesis

There's nowhere else to go
Kisses through stainedglass windows
Icy perfection melts on cue
The winter is fading just like you

Your fangs were sharp, you know
Kisses mimed through stacks of snow
Frost outlines my lips
Icicle tattoo dig into my hip

Candycane breath, whisper in my ear
Shout it over flurries of fear
Blood stained the snowflakes so
Mirroring me with it's pale white glow

You're a nice seasonal treat
Shameless vampire too slow to retreat
You taste like blood to me
Who could gag? it tastes so sweet

Love letters aren't that intense
But thoughtful of course, no offense
Still, marks and scars will stay
Rivaling any fantasy
©2007-2010 ~kayox
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I absolutely love the rhymes you used. First 2 lines are my favorite.

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-adds to favs-

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When live gives you lemons, make fanfiction! :heart:

ohoho I'm creative.

READ MAH YURIIIIIIIIII

like a bright-eyed boy in a candy shop.
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Brilliant...yup, that about sums it up.

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...so i had 3 shots of straight vodka, ran out of Smarties, and had fatal amounts of Starbucks and Albuterol... the sane part of Ash states she is off medication and not liable to any fraudulent charges & is generally a nice pers-!@#$ THAT'S MY MORPHINE!!
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:clap::clap::clap::clap: ^____________^

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Remember what she said, man, don't taunt the voodoo.
Am I taunting it?
DUDE, YOU'RE TAUNTING THE CRAP OUT OF IT!!
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"It's like putting a needle on a cut on your finger, and then putting it on a bottle..."
Kyle
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Oh. My. Gawd. You really have a way with poetry, I absolutely love this!! :heart::heart:

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'I feel so violated... do it again!'
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This is just so utterly amazing,
everything I've ever written just looks like some tiny little emo poem compared to this!
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Thank you so much^^

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Literature addict.
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Don't say that!
This was a spur of the moment thing and it's not even that great.
But thank you so much!


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Literature addict.
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^^ Aww thank you

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Literature addict.

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